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Sunday, February 27, 2011

Fire

BUSHFIRE

So dark

Can't breathe

Hiss and crackle

Radio static ....10 kilometers away...

Hope slowly eroding, passing...GONE
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3 comments:

  1. Roger Owen GreenMarch 3, 2011 at 3:03 PM

    I did FIRE last week, myself. Scary stuff.
    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  2. rebeccaMarch 4, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    This was well captured...I liked the ending very much, powerful.

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  3. Cynthia MMarch 4, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    Thankyou Roger and Rebecca, it is a really evocative subject :)

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