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Monday, June 20, 2011

Brick - Theme Thursday


Each of us significant

playing our part in forming
the evolving wall of humanity.

Shared experience cements us
in love, fear, joy, pain.
Individuals strive incessantly
Courageous souls setting their course
for unity, betterment, evolution.

Undermined by apathy, hostility, neglect
creeping in and sapping strength.
Hindered, never acquiescent.
Ever mindful of the promise
Of universal oneness.

6 comments:

  1. Wow... very soulful. I like this very much...

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  2. I don't know how I missed this ... but glad I finally read it. Very nicely done ... and the image pairs well with it!

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  3. A remarkable image! Wonder how they did that!

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  4. Bijaylaxmi: Thankyou :)
    Beccagivens: Yes, isn't the image unique! Thankyou, I think it fits too :)
    Sara: I know, I have never seen anything like it! Thanks for visiting :)

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  5. I'm really impressed, this poem is the kind of thing I could read daily especially the first line...each of us significant, to remind myself that this is the case. I dont think enough people realise or are shown their significance

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  6. very talented piece.

    excellent write.
    how are you?
    One of your poems are featured in our post today, Thanks.
    welcome sharing 1 to 3 random poems with us today.
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    Happy Labor Day,
    Happy September,
    We miss your talent and hope to see your presence in our growing community this week.
    BEST!
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