POETRY, CREATIVE WRITING AND WHATEVER ELSE APPEALS
........I'M WHOLE, INFINATELY WHOLE......
Jay Z

Thursday, March 10, 2011

SPACE
MUST you sneeze inside my ear
and m
ust you suck upon my hair?
M
ust you throw that bowl so far
w
hile singing twinkle little star?
M
ust you follow me around
so very close without a sound?
So stepping back on little fingers
screams inside my head still linger.
We are still one, we're not yet two
I am old and you are new.
Bound by love, frustration all
power divine for one so small.
MUUUUMMY
Space is but a dream of mine
sleep my elusive valentine...

PICTURE - THE LOUVRE

19 comments:

  1. sounds like frustration.... :-)
    Really beautiful words!!

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  2. Pleasing to the senses... Thank you for visitng my blog Cynthia.

    ♥ ஆεlεɳa ~.^

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  3. Marina..yes, I have an occasional moment but would never change the way my life is :)

    Thanks Helena...it was my pleasure x

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  4. Intriguing crashing together of words. Good read.

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  5. Nice blog post. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  6. Hmmm...I know this life! I'm only just barely escaping it, with my youngest being three and a half. Even still, we have our moments...

    Great TT! :)

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  7. oh yes, the joys of new motherhood :) very well said....

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  8. Thankyou all...sounds like you've been there...coulnt't think of anything I would rather be doing though :)

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  9. Brilliant snapshot of life like it is!! LOL

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  10. Hi Jinsky: Ain't it the truth :)
    Thanks Jingle x

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  11. Love the anguish of the new mother, and desire for space and peace!
    Nice write!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/bubble-bath/

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  12. wow! you've got a full view of the sky and that's everyones dream! here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/cheesecake/

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  13. Mine vommited on me with seemingly planned regularity. Excellent poetic meditation on the situation.

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  14. Thanks everyone....seems it's a universal theme :)

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  15. Wait they become adults! smiles..

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  16. Oh, so familiar! It's such a lovely poem! Thanks for sharing!

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  17. Booguloo...I have a 14year old too so almost there :)
    Mariya: Thankyou :)

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