POETRY, CREATIVE WRITING AND WHATEVER ELSE APPEALS
........I'M WHOLE, INFINATELY WHOLE......Jay Z

Sunday, March 20, 2011


free
to be
who i am
just who i be
 is it me
 who is
free
 free indeed
 just me wholly
as meant to be
 being free as
 free can
 be



PICTURE - ROYALTY FREE STOCK PHOTOS

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15 comments:

  1. HazelMarch 21, 2011 at 4:41 AM

    Love your use of simple words to express a very important concept.

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  2. Hootin AnniMarch 21, 2011 at 5:34 AM

    This is truly, word perfect!!

    Thanks for stopping by yesterday to visit.

    Monday's link:
    Spring in my Corner of the World

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  3. Catherine DentonMarch 21, 2011 at 5:36 AM

    What an amazing but difficult thing to accomplish! That photo fits--trying to find our center.
    My Blog

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  4. Jae RoseMarch 21, 2011 at 5:38 AM

    Free and flying just like that wonderful spiral..reminds me of 'Spirographs'..how as a child you can be so filled up by patterns and colours..Jae

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  5. Ms. BeckyMarch 21, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    what lovely writing. you write with raw insight and that's so beautiful. I love the images of your shadow shots too, from the previous post. our spring is just beginning as is your fall. both glorious seasons, no? thanks for visiting my blog I really appreciate it. have a really great day.

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  6. UnknownMarch 21, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    Free... Perfectly!
    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/31/you-me-and-fibonacci/

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  7. JingleMarch 21, 2011 at 11:17 AM

    lovely, the use of color and the shape, are impressive.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    Cynthia, loved "just who I be," it's a fun phrase. This was a freeing, beautiful thought for today. Urges me to free myself from my computer ASAP and go outside!

    Amy BL

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  9. Kodjo DeynooMarch 21, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    Freedom is desirable and you described it well.

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  10. Old EggMarch 21, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    What a fun piece with just two words of two syllables. It bounced along with abandon, with joy at the freedom. Joyous indeed.

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  11. UnknownMarch 21, 2011 at 8:29 PM

    Hazel: Thankyou, less is more sometimes huh :)
    Thanks Anni, it's always a pleasure to see what you're up to :)
    Thanks Catherine, I try to stop and find my centre every now and then :)
    You're right Jae, I loved those spirographs ...spent hours creating swirly masterpieces :)
    Miss Becky:Thankyou, that really means a lot x
    Thanks Kim, will drop by in a minute :)
    Jingle:Thanks Jingle, I love playing with aesthetics :)
    Thanks Amy, enjoy your time outside :)
    Thanks Kodjo :)
    Oldegg: Glad you enjoyed it :)

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  12. Cynthia MMarch 21, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    sorry that was me....shared computer and all that :)

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  13. RJ ClarkenMarch 22, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    I love the pairing of your words and the free-spirited graphic accompanying it. Really really nice!

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  14. NankaMarch 25, 2011 at 9:20 AM

    Freedom is so important and your poem today is buoyant and optimistic!!

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  15. Cynthia MMarch 25, 2011 at 3:03 PM

    Thankyou lightverse and Nanka, I appreciate your comments :)

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