POETRY, CREATIVE WRITING AND WHATEVER ELSE APPEALS
........I'M WHOLE, INFINATELY WHOLE......Jay Z

Friday, March 4, 2011


sky
azure blue
corn shining green
magical glimmer enlivens me
sun hope and heart warming radiation
permeates the hibernation of the meanwhile
until I join the sanctity of my little garden world



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11 comments:

  1. Brian MillerMarch 4, 2011 at 4:10 AM

    nice. you paint a pretty scene there in the garden...our grape arbor will begin coming alive soon...i can wait as i love to sit there..

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 4, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    love the shape, you are super creative.

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  3. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 4, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    share one piece with us and have fun!
    thanks.

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  4. MarshyMarch 4, 2011 at 1:33 PM

    yep..the garden...sigh...nice description here..cheers pete

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  5. Maude LynnMarch 4, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    Yes! Can't wait to get in my garden.

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  6. Cynthia MMarch 4, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    Thanks so much for your feedback...everything is so beautiful in the garden at the moment. We're in the Southern Hemisphere so heading into Autumn - just perfect :)

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  7. Other MaryMarch 5, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    Nicely done. I like the form and the internal rhyme.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 5, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    What a great feeling this anoints me with! I can feel that sun hope and heart warming. Very nice poem, good rhythm!

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  9. Cynthia MMarch 5, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    Thankyou :)

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  10. Tarang SinhaMarch 18, 2011 at 4:16 AM

    Very nice & refreshing!

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  11. totomaiMarch 19, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    soon! everything will pastel-colored. yay for spring!

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