POETRY, CREATIVE WRITING AND WHATEVER ELSE APPEALS
........I'M WHOLE, INFINATELY WHOLE......
Jay Z

Friday, March 4, 2011


sky
azure blue
corn shining green
magical glimmer enlivens me
sun hope and heart warming radiation
permeates the hibernation of the meanwhile
until I join the sanctity of my little garden world




11 comments:

  1. nice. you paint a pretty scene there in the garden...our grape arbor will begin coming alive soon...i can wait as i love to sit there..

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  2. love the shape, you are super creative.

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  3. share one piece with us and have fun!
    thanks.

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  4. yep..the garden...sigh...nice description here..cheers pete

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  5. Yes! Can't wait to get in my garden.

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  6. Thanks so much for your feedback...everything is so beautiful in the garden at the moment. We're in the Southern Hemisphere so heading into Autumn - just perfect :)

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  7. Nicely done. I like the form and the internal rhyme.

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  8. What a great feeling this anoints me with! I can feel that sun hope and heart warming. Very nice poem, good rhythm!

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  9. soon! everything will pastel-colored. yay for spring!

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