POETRY, CREATIVE WRITING AND WHATEVER ELSE APPEALS
........I'M WHOLE, INFINATELY WHOLE......
Jay Z

Sunday, March 20, 2011


free
to be
who i am
just who i be
is it me
who is
free
free indeed
just me wholly
as meant to be
being free as
free can
be



PICTURE - ROYALTY FREE STOCK PHOTOS

15 comments:

  1. Love your use of simple words to express a very important concept.

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  2. This is truly, word perfect!!

    Thanks for stopping by yesterday to visit.

    Monday's link:
    Spring in my Corner of the World

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  3. What an amazing but difficult thing to accomplish! That photo fits--trying to find our center.
    My Blog

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  4. Free and flying just like that wonderful spiral..reminds me of 'Spirographs'..how as a child you can be so filled up by patterns and colours..Jae

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  5. what lovely writing. you write with raw insight and that's so beautiful. I love the images of your shadow shots too, from the previous post. our spring is just beginning as is your fall. both glorious seasons, no? thanks for visiting my blog I really appreciate it. have a really great day.

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  6. Free... Perfectly!
    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/31/you-me-and-fibonacci/

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  7. lovely, the use of color and the shape, are impressive.

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  8. Cynthia, loved "just who I be," it's a fun phrase. This was a freeing, beautiful thought for today. Urges me to free myself from my computer ASAP and go outside!

    Amy BL

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  9. Freedom is desirable and you described it well.

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  10. What a fun piece with just two words of two syllables. It bounced along with abandon, with joy at the freedom. Joyous indeed.

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  11. Hazel: Thankyou, less is more sometimes huh :)
    Thanks Anni, it's always a pleasure to see what you're up to :)
    Thanks Catherine, I try to stop and find my centre every now and then :)
    You're right Jae, I loved those spirographs ...spent hours creating swirly masterpieces :)
    Miss Becky:Thankyou, that really means a lot x
    Thanks Kim, will drop by in a minute :)
    Jingle:Thanks Jingle, I love playing with aesthetics :)
    Thanks Amy, enjoy your time outside :)
    Thanks Kodjo :)
    Oldegg: Glad you enjoyed it :)

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  12. sorry that was me....shared computer and all that :)

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  13. I love the pairing of your words and the free-spirited graphic accompanying it. Really really nice!

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  14. Freedom is so important and your poem today is buoyant and optimistic!!

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  15. Thankyou lightverse and Nanka, I appreciate your comments :)

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